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The first sentence states the
obvious. Pretty much everyone knows
what Viagra is. The second sentence is
a lie, and people sense it. You are
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state you provide the service without trying
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over-used and sales-pitchy. The last
sentences of both the third and fourth
paragraphs repeat what has already been
said. The next paragraphs lack any
sort of subtle transition and can be deleted
as filler-text since they describe the
navigation bar (which is clear enough by
itself).
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