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BEFORE "200%
Guaranteed to work!
Do you have to
pass a drug test? If so, don't
rely on gimmicks and home
remedies to pass your drug test.
Put your trust in a company that
guarantees you'll pass your drug
test. In fact we offer a 200%
guarantee you will pass your
drug test using our products or
we pay you. We want you to be
completely 200% confident in
your purchase.
For over 10 years we've been
providing quality products so
that you can pass any drug test
- and we guarantee it!
We have sold more detoxification
products than all other online
retailers combined!"
Copywriting Analysis:
The
copy sounds like a bad used-car
salesman.
AFTER
"Pass
A Drug Test
Of all the ways to pass a drug
test, don't let yourself get caught using some rumored home
remedy or ancient product you found in the back of your
closet. There are effective ways to pass a drug
test, but you must find a product that you trust. We
know that can be hard with all the products and ways to pass
a drug test out there. Sometimes it seems easier to just
hope for the best than to try to figure out which ways to
pass a drug test actually work. Don't.
Why? Because if you let
nature take its course and you are caught within your drug
detection times, you will fail. Of all
the ways to pass a drug test, doing nothing is the one sure
way to screw things up. So why a product?
Why not a home remedy you heard about from your friends?
Because drug testing is a science. Drug testing
products are also a science. Drug testing products are
designed by laboratory technicians who specialize in
creating ways to pass a drug test. Rely on scientists
to know how to beat scientists. It only makes sense.
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